Temptation by Raphael Kirchner
I sense the silence here today
between us fly the fantasies
I close my eyes, smell your bouquet
I sense the silence here today
your unwashed pheromones betray
as mutual touch of closeness tease
I sense the silence here today
between us fly the fantasies
In dVerse Shanyn has us to write short and sweet love-poetry avoiding the usual terms.I might have gone into triolets a little bit to much again, but it fits so well with love poetry.
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February 15, 2014
Björn Rudbergs writings 
Silence CAN inspire fantasies. Fine triolet, Bjorn.
I love this image of unwashed pheromones. It’s sultry in a very creative way.
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Unwashed pheromones… love it!
oh i love the unwashed pheromones…. and cool on the fantasies in the silence, the sense of closeness….nice…
I love this. Great use of repeated phrases, and unwashed pheromones is a very striking combination of words, I also like sense your bouquet, fantasies fly … Nothing is said, but it is there, strong and present, that heightened awareness of the other person.
oo la…scent plays such an important role in sesuality…
and there are def times it is so heady, there is a sure outcome
if willing…ha
Great use of the triolet, Björn! I like the silent and ‘closed eyes’ scene you have shown us.
That’s lovely, darling. Very sexy, too.
What’s that smell, is Love in the air? Clever, sweet, and randy, brother; enjoyed your triolet.
Lovely triolet Bjorn ~ I like the refrain: between us fly the fantasies ~
Nicely done without excess. Words were used to the best advantagel
Bjorn, thanks for stopping by my blog. This triolet, a form I have never mastered to my satisfaction, is divine. The use of pheremones in great, and the steamy romance in this is sultry as all get-out. Brill. AMy
O. Yes. Fits the Triolet. But I wasn’t thinking about form when I read it.
Chemical signals do the talking louder than words 🙂
Indeed seductive!
That is just so evocative .. nice piece
Nice.
I too like the refrain–love the fantasies and the pheremones
Mmmm very Fine 🙂
Well written!
Such oceans behind the drying moisture of a kiss! We only think we understand the language of passion.
LOVE this. Sensual and very well done. Your love must be impressed!
Ooooh–got to watch out for those sly pheromones!! Nice triolet, Bjorn!
Very subtle in neatness, Bjorn! Wonderful triolet!
Hank
Love the metaphors in this triolet. You paints a sensual and vivid picture.
Beautiful Bjorn. Love the interplay of emotions.
I love it, Bjorn!
The lull before the storm…
Very sensual, Bjorn–and your words sing in the triolet form. Lovely.
Scent can be very sensual … definitely unique imagery here … well done with the triolet, Bjorn 🙂
Silence can bring on many a fantasy indeed
Hi, I enjoyed your triolet. Especially your word choices conveying a twist. I’ll have to look up pheromones though!
Yes I will have to look up pheromones too! 🙂 Nice triolet.
Your poem sounds like a seductive whisper. 🙂
Sweet Swedish Sexig Love Poem 🙂
Astoundingly breath-taking. Soft. Sensual. Powerful word choices.