Carpe Diem – Than Bauk “wise man”


the day he dies
regrets lies told –
the wise man weeps

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October 20, 2013

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9 responses to “Carpe Diem – Than Bauk “wise man”

  1. Nice thanbauk Bjorn … I did some research on thanbauk and I like this form of poetry very much. I will try this form sometimes I think … Thank you for bringing this form to my attention.

  2. so you’re the perpetrator! I found this’ tres difficile’, but you nailed it – well done, Bjorn

  3. Bjorn, I didn’t know about the than bauk form, but you use it to great effect. And as for the man… too late the regrets, for there is no remedy available to the dead man, right? Amy

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